Friday, May 28, 2010

Farewell Blogger

Well, this quarter has finally come to an end. No more weekly blog posts, no more big research papers. It's summertime! I really enjoyed this quarter, though. The papers were big, but they were no where near as hard or as stressful as I planned them to be. I got through it, and from the looks of it, so did everyone else in the class. Go us!!

Ms. Kraft was a pretty awesome professor, and made the class a little more enjoyable. It didn't seem like the class was all about writing, even though it was ha. The quarter flew by, and was pretty easy. I thought this class was going to be the hardest and most stressful because of all the papers, but it was actually the other way around.
I really like the topic I picked for my research, and I learned things I didn't know before from all the research. This made it easier to write the papers, and once the research was out of the way, it all came pretty easy.

Overall, I enjoyed the class, and I had a good time. Hopefully the next English class I take is this easy, or at least close. Thanks Professor Kraft!!

Thursday, May 27, 2010

Wild Children---They're in Your Backyard!

Britainy Gober
May 27, 2010



You may think I'm crazy, but I'm being serious. I'm not talking about the annoying brats next door who won't stay out of your yard, and keep hitting your house with tennis balls, either. I'm talking real, wild children; call them animals if you want. That's what most people consider them. And maybe I'm exaggerating. They may not be RIGHT in your backyard, but they're closer than people would like to imagine.




When people hear of "feral children," they probably start thinking of dog-like kids from back in ancient history in other non developed countries. If not, then they're probably thinking Tarzan. Well, not all feral children are animal-like. Sure, we all know of Victor, the thirty five year old man who died unable to speak or anything. He was found by a doctor, saved from wolves, and never adapted to human society. Not all cases are like that. Some are just simply isolated by their family, and never, ever interact with the outside world. Also, they're not all historical stories either. This is happening now, and it's happening here...In the U.S.





Fifteen cases have been reported in our country, two in the past three years. One of the most famous cases is the story of Genie. She was strapped to a toilet seat for twelve, yeah that's right, TWELVE YEARS. She couldn't talk, or walk, or even feed herself, at the age of thirteen. Her father had a problem with kids and just decided he was going to totally ruin her life, which he did. Go Dad!


< PICTURE OF GENIE WHEN SHE WAS FOUND.











Another famous, heart-breaking story is that of Dani. This little girl, about seven when she was found, was left in a room the size of a very small closet. Her mother and brothers paid her no attention. She was never toilet trained, and never wore clothes. Her house was covered in bugs and feces. The only thing that saved this little girl was her concerned neighbors. Maybe I should mention it took the police three attempts to finally say, "Hey, ya know, maybe this isn't right. Maybe we should take this girl away." I guess it wasn't obvious enough for them that a seven year old in diapers and lice isn't exactly normal.


DANI AT 7 YEARS OLD


Anyway, you're probably wondering what happens to those kids. Well, for the ones who aren't left on their own, and kept in the conditions they're in, are adopted, some are put into hospitals and homes, and some are kind of used as lab rats. Doctors do studies on them to see how they think and act, and they use them to help find answers to certain disorders, such as autism.




Genie experienced a little bit of all of it. They gave her tests, which she scored high on, and they put her in hospitals so that special people could work with her and help her recover from her situation. It has been shown that after a certain age, it is unheard of for people to learn how to talk. Sine Genie never learned to speak from her parents, they tried working with her, but just like they thought, she didn't learn too much. Dani was adopted to a loving family and almost completely recovered from the things she suffered from.





The kids who are raised by actual animals have less of a chance of recovery, but I think they aren't given enough attention. People want to just discard them because there is a chance they may be a little dangerous. I think if there is a chance that an innocent child can be saved and given a good life, we should take that chance.





These kids need help. If someone finds a child in the wild who seems to have no home or family, they should contact a hospital or police, and try to get the kid help. They can't stay out in the wild that way, no matter what people would like to say. Some think since they have lived in the wild as long as they have, we should leave them alone and let them continue living that way. WRONG. You can't just do that to a kid. They need to be rescued, and they need to be given the attention they have been denied all their lives.



If a kid is discovered in a home, but in a really terrible situation like Genie and Dani, then the police should definitely be contacted. You can't let a little kid continue to be neglected and mistreated that way. The kids should be taken care of by doctors so they can learn things and try to live a normal life. They should be put into schools, and given an education. They're humans no matter what anyone would like to think. They should be treated like every other kid in the world, and have the same opportunities as well.




Cases of feral children are reported way too often. Police and other law enforcers need to step up and be doing their part to help stop situations like this. Parents need to know they can't just completely ignore a kid for years and years, just because they don't want them or are unable to take care of them. There are other options, like adoption. In a lot of the cases, the parents don't have to do jail time, because studies get done on them and the parents end up having something wrong with them themselves. I don't think this is fair. They messed up a child's whole life, and they deserve to have to pay for it. They should be locked up, and they should have to deal with the consequences of what they did for the rest of their lives.




Every child deserves a shot at a normal life. There is no reason that a kid should be locked in another room their entire lives, or given up to animals. Unfortunately, not all parents are able to handle the responsibility of having a kid. I don't exactly know what they expect to have to deal with, but I'm not going to get started on that. Once the kids are rescued from these pathetic people, or wild animals, they should be given an education and the help they need to try to take care of themselves in this world. Forget about them being dangerous, or a threat. They're little kids! Open your eyes people! It's about time everyone realizes this is a problem here at home, and these kids need help. Do your part.
http://www.feralchildren.com visit this site for photos, info, and more!

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Why I write

Why do I write? Well considering I'm a freshman college kid taking COMPOSITION classes, I'd say it's pretty obvious why I write. But is there more to it? WEll, of course there is.
I write to say the things I am unable to say aloud. Like to the people I wait on at work who ask for vegetable soup with extra vegetables. I'd like to say, "Okay, let me go out back to my garden and chup up some for ya."

Let's not forget about the dishwasher, and how he cleans his line at 4:30 when we close at eleven. Then, he yells and throws stuff everytime a server puts dishes in the window. I'd like to ask him what he was expecting when he applied for the job, because obviously he didn't know he'd have to wash dishes.

Ever watch a movie and wish you could be in their position, or live the life they are living. Don't lie, we all do. Well since we can't all create our own perfect fairy tale, I write to make my own. I invent a world that's a little outside the lines. A place that helps you fit the tiny pieces of your puzzle together, just when it seems like it'll never happen.

In today's world, a teenager's life isn't complete without texting and facebook updates. I write down song lyrics on my facebook page. I write messages through texting telling my boyfriend he's a nerd and looks funny. Then I write to tell him I'm kidding, otherwise he'll drive to my house just to body slam me.

But in the end, the question still remains. Why write? I write to entertain, to be creative. I write because I'm bored. I write because I have to. I write to tell stories, to tell jokes, and I may make people mad when I write. I may also make them wonder what kind of drugs I may be taking. (None by the way.) It all comes down to one point. I write because I want to.

Tuesday, May 4, 2010

Hw. for wednesday

www.foxnews.com/world/2010/05/03/usama-bin-ladin

The blogger, Ed Barnes, is responding to the living conditions of Usama Bin Ladin, and his whereabouts.

He doesn't state his opinion, or tell whether or not he agrees. He quotes a guy named Parrott though, and it seems he agrees with that guy for the most part. The entry is set up to tell what Parrot says and thinks as if he is trying to get it out there because he agrees with him.

He is trying to let the reader know that Ladin is still out there, and he isn't as lonely and miserable as the media tries to tell us. He is living comfortably with company and isn't having much of a difficult life like they try to make us believe. He is doing this by giving support and explaining how the Parrot guy knows about all of this stuff.

this differs because the set up is way different.

Friday, April 30, 2010

Weekly Bloggg

I am really excited that the eight page paper is almost out of the way! I came up with a little over five pages for the rough draft, so I'm hoping the next three pages come easy. I feel like there's not much more I can add to my paper, so hopefully my peer review partners can give me a few ideas. I have seven sources, so it seems like my paper would be done, but not quite ha.

I enjoyed having class outside today. It was a little chilly and super windy, but I hate sitting in the classroom on a nice day. The reading exercise wasn't too exciting, but we each noticed things we wouldn't have noticed if we didn't read. Hopefully the class at Starbucks goes fast because I always get a headache in there haha.

I can't wait to get started on the final paper, because it will feel closer to the end once that one is finished. A lot of my friends are done with class, or will be next week. Having a whole month or so to go is kind of depressing. Plus, the four page paper will hopefully be really easy because I came up with five for this one in like a half an hour. I really like my topic, and I think it is interesting, so I think that's why I'm able to come up with the stuff. Just three more pages to go!!

Sunday, April 25, 2010

outline

Thesis=Although feral children don't know the basics to a civilized life, and may come across as dangerous, they are still humans, and they deserve a shot at a normal life.

studies have shown they can learn enough to live in society
-Genie recovered (look at article)

they can be saved, it's happened
A1 C6

they develop disorders, which can be treated
-**d7 D8

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they've lived on their own long enough, they can keep doing it.
-not all feral kids come from the wild
- they could die from diseases

they're dangerous
-animals can be tamed, so can the kids.

they need to be locked up
-they're kids. treat them
- locking up is making them worse

they are a hoax
- there are lots of hoaxes people waste time on.
- these cases have been proven and researched.
-feral children.com
- B3 B4

Friday, April 23, 2010

Weekly Blog

This week I feel like I got a lot accomplished. The exercises we have been doing in class, and the homework assignments have been really helpful. Usually, I have an issue writing my intro and conclusion, especially as fast as I had to in class. With this topic though, things were coming to me quick, and I think I have a solid intro. By the end of the paper I think I will be able to tweek my conclusion a little more and make it better. I was surprised how fast I came up with them compared to others I have written. I feel like I'm way ahead of the game, and my paper is coming along well. Hopefully I don't get off track!

I am really glad we did an outline in class. I try to do one for every paper I write, but sometimes I don't feel like dealing with it, or can't come up with anything to put on it that would help me. I got this outline mostly finished today, and I think it is really going to help me out. My sources are solid, and I have good quotes that fit in right where I need them to. I found out though that I am going to need a few more sources. While doing the outline, I came up with a few points that I could add into my paper, but I haven't researched them too much. I've learned about some of it in my psychology class, but I need the sources. So that sort of stopped me from finishing my outline. Hopefully over the weekend I can find some good sources to help add these points to my paper.

Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Intro and Conclusion

In 2002, a girl named Genie was found in California at the age of thirteen. She couldn't stand on her own two feet, wasn't potty trained, and couldn't speak. Instead, she growled like an animal at anyone who came near her. As police found out, she had been locked in the bathroom for twelve years, and never interacted with a single person. Her mother was blind, and her brother had a few seconds to feed her a day, then he had to leave, or their father would beat him. There are hundreds of cases like this, reported every so often, and they call these kids "feral children." They can be considered dangerous, and the ones found in the wild are usually left there. They are not receiving the help they should be, because people think they pose a threat to others. Although feral children don't know the basics to a civilized life, and may come across as dangerous, they are still humans, and deserve a shot at a normal life.



As I have pointed out throughout this paper, these children deserve a shot at a normal life. Studies show that there is hope, and there is a chance that they can lead a civilized life. As for the ones who can't, we can't give up hope. They still need help, and shouldn't continue to be neglected, or left to fend for themselves like they have all along. If people can take animals out of the wild and teach them things, then they can with these children, too. Kids aren't supposed to have to fend for themselves that way. They also shouldn't be beaten and denied attention once they're saved. We can help these children, and it's time we start.

Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Proposal

Britainy Gober
Prof. Kraft
English 102

Research Topic-Feral Children
Research Question-Is there hope for them after they are found, and should we be doing more for them.

I am choosing to write about feral children because I think they deserve a shot at a normal life. I do not think they are safe out in the wild on their own. Children aren't meant to be out there like that, otherwise everyone would be. They are not animals, so they shouldn't have to live and be treated like animals. This topic is important because there are thousands of cases of feral children across the world, and there doesn't seem to be much going on to help them. They are not put on the news, or brought to peoples' attentions, so a lot of people don't even know that a kid out there needs their help.

I plan on addressing my audience with this topic by throwing stats at them, and going in to detail about some of the more serious cases I have learned about. I want the readers to get a feel for what is going on to these children, even after they are saved. I plan to use emotional tactics to have the audience feel sorry for these kids, and hopefully try to find ways to help them. This topic is important to me because I am a very pro life person. And I believe pro life doesn't just have to do with abortions. Kids should not be thrown into the wild and left to fend for themselves, just because the parents are unable to help them. There are shelters and other places to leave the children. I have been doing large amounts of research on this topic, for a few weeks now. I believe I know enough about the topic to explain it to other people and try to get my point across that these children need help and deserve a better shot at life.

Friday, April 16, 2010

Weekly Blog 2

This week went by super fast, since we only had one class meeting. I had some trouble with the bibliography because every source I planned on using either didnn't have quotes, or there was no information for me to use to cite it. It was a long homework assignment, and it took me quite awhile to do. But I'm glad we had to do it because now I have a lot of the information I will need for my paper, and my sources are already cited.
I was one of the about five people who didnt get the email on Wednesday about class being cancelled. So I drove all the way to school and found out, and didn't have another class until one. But I got a lot of homework done in that time!
I'm still feeling a little confused about our papers. I feel like I'm behind or something, when we haven't really gotten too far into it yet. I want to just get it out of the way and move onto the shorter paper ha. I was wondering if we're only allowed to have five sources, or if we can have more. And I also wanted to know if we have to stick with the ones in our bibliography, or if we can drop and add some if we find better sources.
I at least feel like I am getting a good grasp on my topic and understanding it more because of the assignments we have been given to do. Hopefully it continues to get easier and isn't as stressful as I'm expecting!

Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Bibliography

Newton, Michael. "Feral Child." Savage Boys and Wild Girls. 2002. Book. 13 April 2010.

  • "Children with some human experience before isolation are more easily rehabilitated after discovery."

  • " Early years in childhood development are absolutely crucial."
This article gives definitions of "feral" and lists certain cases of children who were found. It talks about the chances of recovery for certain situations.

Thesis= Early years in childhood development are absolutely crucial.


Lopez, Barry. "The Wolf Girl of Devil's River." Of Wolves and Men. 1978. Book. 13 April 2010.

  • "During the past forty years, I have, in the country, met more than one wolf face strongly marked with human characteristics."
  • "Her hands and arms were well muscled, but not out of proportion, and she lacked the ability to speak."
This article tells the story about a wolf girl who's mother died in 1835, and the baby was taken by wolves. Cowboys spotted her years later, and tried to take her but she got away. She howled and refused to wear the clothes they gave her.
There isn't a thesis.


Pines, Maya. "The Civilizing of Genie." 8 October 2002. Book. 13 April 2010.

  • "Genie, unlike 99% of right handed people, used the right hemisphere of her brain for language."
  • "One the Mooney Faces test, Genie's performance was the highest reported in literature for child and adult."
This site talks about Genie's situation, and how she became the way she is. It pointed out all the steps taken to help her, and her recovery along the way.
Thesis= Genie, now 24, has stirred up new questions about language and intelligence.


Stewart, Heather. "Feral Children." Neuroscience of the Movies. Web. 13 April 2010.

  • "Studies of feral children have led to new methods for teaching children with learning disabilities."
  • "Depending on the age at which they are removed from human contact and the age at which they are retrieved, feral children may not ever be able to develop normal communication patterns."
This site talks about the ways the discovery of these people are helping advance research for disabled people in our society.
Thesis= Stories of feral children have intrigued many people for possible clues to the effect of socialization on language and communication skills.


"A list of Isolated, Confined, and Feral Children." Web. 13 April 2010.

There are no quotes.
This article gives pictures of hundreds of cases of feral children, and their story. For some of them, they tell whether or not they adapted back to the civilized life, or were left in the wild.


Friday, April 9, 2010

Weekly Blog 1

So we're at the end of the second week so far and I think the class is going pretty smooth. I
was a little worried about the whole 8 page paper, but the more exercises we do, the more

confident I feel about it. I'm sure it will still be pretty hard and stressful, because most

research papers are that way.

I liked the exercise we did today with our random topics. I did mine on procrastination.

It helped get a better understanding of ways to start the paper. I think I am going to use the

story telling option, because it takes up a little more room, and I get my point across better

when I can tell a story related to the topic.

I'm glad we don't have any written homework for the weekend, and I hope we keep

working on things next week to help with our papers, that way it comes as easy as possible.

Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Homework for friday

http://www.feralchildren.com/
the audience would be anyone interested in these cases.
there isn't a thesis statement, because they are just reports, but I think it will be helpful for my paper.


http://www.findarticles.com/
The audience for this article would be doctors or researchers.
The thesis is "researchers seek to answer the question of whether their abnormalities existed before their removal from society or because of their isolation.


http://www.mysteriouspeople.com/
audience= people who are into science fiction and horror. They make the article seem scary.
Thesis=There doesn't seem to be a set thesis.

http://www.ebscohost.com/ "dog boy"
audience= People who are researching this topic
thesis= "Dog boy sounds like a headline from a trashy magazine in a grocery checkout line. But rest assured, it's quite the opposite."

Monday, April 5, 2010

Homework for Wednesday

Question=
Do feral children deserve a chance at a normal life or should they be kept in shelters/ hospitals.

Thesis=
Although feral children were raised in the wild and seem dangerous to some people, I think they should be given a chance at a normal life because they are still humans and have the same rights as everyone else.

Wednesday, March 31, 2010

Hello!
So I'm not really sure if we have a certain topic we are supposed to talk about or not, but if so, I don't know what it is. So I'm just going to say I'm glad we got out of class early today, and I really don't want to go to my next one. It's too nice outside!!
my ideas for my paper are...
feral children
vitaligo
link between marijuana and schizophrenia